Bewildered (Haiku)

When the snowflake shines,

it doesn’t lookΒ bewildered

staring at the sun.

 

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Blessings,

Gavin

Published by Gavin Whyte

I am the author of the modern-day fables The Girl with the Green-Tinted Hair, and Happiness & Honey, plus several other works of fiction.

7 thoughts on “Bewildered (Haiku)

  1. It still doesn’t capture the essence of what a haiku should be, but I’m ok with that. I like using the 17-syllable structure to express observations, it’s a sweet little challenge.

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